Hi friends,

The rhyming scheme follows very nicely, which compliments the emotions in the poem itself. It feels as though this is a part of something much, much bigger, though - a whole other story that the reader wants to discover, which, in poetry, is precisely the goal that is looked to be achieved.

So, an invisible one....is it?
leila`s gone to look again.

She keeps playing with Linux.


lavender.

And where's the poem?
It seem that Areli Clemens forgot to include it with her post...
I am interested to read it and do some comments, coz I am also a writer..
I love to write poems and songs as well... Sometimes i turn them into songs...